We were learning about the people who were first to come to New Zealand and I chose to learn about the whalers.
I found it easy to find images to add to my research.
I found it hard to connect my ideas for my story about the whalers.
I really enjoyed talking and learning about the whalers in New Zealand.
Next time I need to see if I can find even more information to share.
Hi Lucas
ReplyDeleteIt's Olive,I really like that you added lots of detail to your writing and I know more about the whalers. Next time you can write about someone else for your learning I added photos to in my writing.
Hi Lucas, It's Navani I think that your writing has a lot of colour and lots of boldness to it and that can sometimes be good and sometimes not. I never knew that the Whalers came from Russia, Germany, Spain, Portugal, and America.
ReplyDeleteThat is a lot of countries. Next time you could possibly make your blog post smaller so it doesn't go of the side. Bye Lucas.