We were learning about what changes during our lives.
I found it easy to find the background for my writing.
I found it hard to Write all my ideas in to the poem.
I really enjoyed making the background neon coloured.
Next time I need to get more information from the class brainstorm sheets.
Hi Lucas. I'm Navani and I really liked how you decided on each example for what change. I like how you wrote Growing from baby to adult but I think that you could improve that sentence a little bit more. Next time you could possibly change the background to something more subtle so anyone can read it. Bye Lucas.
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